The Pendant – Part 5 (Alternate Ending)

At some point during the middle of the night, Claire had fallen back to sleep. She awoke several hours later, the sky still dark. Claire felt an ache in her heart, and she placed her hand on her chest, her fingertips touching the pendant. Although she knew it was illogical, she could not shake the feeling that she really had seen Katie; she believed whole-heartedly that Katie was still alive and needed her help. With a newfound sense of determination, Claire threw aside her covers and quickly began to dress herself. It was still very early, and so as not to wake her parents, Claire made sure to step carefully down the staircase, avoiding the creaky spots. She took her shawl from its hook, quietly unlatched the front door, and stepped out onto the street.

She walked at a quick pace, heading directly towards the shop owned by the mysterious red-bearded man. As she neared the shop front, a light shone from somewhere inside the shop, and its owner opened the front door, as Claire reached the doorway.

“Claire. I was hoping you would come. Please do come inside,” said the red-bearded man in a calm voice.

“How did you – ?”

“I promise, all will be explained. Please follow me.”

He smiled reassuringly and yet the look in his eyes was grave. Claire hesitated and felt as though a stone had dropped in her stomach. Then she remembered her dream and the desperate look in Katie’s eyes. She crossed the threshold and the red-bearded man closed and locked the door behind her. He led her towards the back of the shop into a dimly lit room, which appeared to be his office. On two walls there were bookshelves overflowing with books and scrolls. An oak desk was situated in the center of the room, the top covered with papers and fascinating objects. In one corner of the room stood a cabinet with the most beautiful and intricate carvings.

“Please, do sit down,” said the man, offering Claire a small chair.

Walking to the opposite side of the desk and sitting in his own chair, the red-bearded man pulled his pipe from his coat pocket. Striking a match, he lit his pipe and took a long, slow puff. He held the smoke in his mouth for a moment, although it seemed an eternity to Claire. He finally parted his lips and sighed, the smoke encircling his head.

“I realize that all of this must seem very strange for you. Allow me to introduce myself – my name is Jasper. I am sure by now you have discovered that the pendant you wear is no ordinary necklace. I am sorry for keeping you in the dark until now, but I had to be certain that you could connect with the powers residing inside of this rare piece. It was crafted by a skilled alchemist. Her name…was Gerwyn, and she was the love of my life.”

He paused, taking another puff of his pipe.

“Gerwyn and I met one late spring evening, when we were young. She confided in me and told me that she came from another world, where every person and creature is born with magical talents. Gerwyn had a natural affinity with flora and fauna. During one of our first conversations, she explained to me how certain times of the year, the division between this world and the other world – her world – became thin enough for her, and others like her, to pass through. For many years we only saw each other for a few, precious days. I also learned that because she was born in the other world, she could not stay in this world for too long, or else she risked losing her magical talents and becoming mortal. Despite these limitations, we formed an unlikely friendship, and with each passing year our love for one another grew stronger.

“One summer evening, Gerwyn found me in the forest. She showed me the pendant and told me that she had found a way for us to be together. She had collected a particularly powerful four-leaf clover and preserved its magical properties by creating the pendant. You see, Claire, the pendant is the key to the doorway between this world and the other world; it also protects the wearer. The pendant not only allowed Gerwyn to pass through the division, it enabled both of us to go through together at any time, so long as we were physically connected in some way.

“We were overjoyed, because we could finally exist in the same world. We agreed and promised to build a life wherein we had a home in both of our worlds – she wearing the pendant while here, and I wearing the pendant when in her world. In the autumn of my eighteenth year, we married here in the village of my birth. Shortly after our wedding, we went together to Gerwyn’s world. The years passed, and we kept our promise to one another – living our lives together both in this world and the other world. We were so happy…”

Jasper’s words faltered, and tears began to fill his eyes. Claire waited, unsure of what to say but sensing the deep sorrow that he carried.

He continued, “Three years….It was three years ago…when everything changed.”

Claire felt as though a cold draught had passed through her. Three years ago was when Katie had disappeared. She wondered, Could this be a coincidence?

As if reading her mind, Jasper said, “Your friend, Katie Hanover…disappeared three years ago, shortly after she took the pendant from Gerwyn.”

Claire could not believe what she was hearing. Surely, he is mistaken, she thought.

“What do you mean – Katie took the pendant?” asked Claire, with trepidation.

Jasper puffed on his pipe and stared back at Claire. Finally he answered, “Katie, as you well know, has a curious nature. One day when Gerwyn and I were walking in the forest, Katie witnessed some of the magical properties of the pendant at work. We didn’t realize at the time that she was there.

“You have to understand, Claire, that the magic of the pendant is neither good nor bad. It yields to the will of its owner. Gerwyn used the power of the pendant to heal plants and animals, which is what she was doing when Katie spotted us in the forest. Each wearer of the pendant has the choice of how he or she will harness the magic. I believe that Katie never meant any harm when she took the pendant; she was only a young girl and didn’t understand the significance of her action.

“Unfortunately, when we awoke the next morning, we discovered that the pendant was gone. We spent several days searching the cottage for the lost necklace, knowing that we needed to find it as soon as possible, for Gerwyn’s sake. On the fifth day, Gerwyn became extremely ill. I did everything I could to try and save her, but we both knew that unless we found the pendant, or discovered another way to get her back to the other world – she was going to die. She grew weaker with each passing day, and she lost her own magical powers much faster than either of us expected. I can still remember holding her hand, as she took her final breaths….I felt completely helpless to save her – my love, my wife, my friend.”

Jasper looked down, and snuffed out his pipe.

“I am so sorry,” was all that Claire could say.

He replaced his pipe inside his coat pocket, and met Claire’s eyes once again.

“I told you that I believe that Katie never intended to hurt Gerwyn, or cause her to die. Something changed in Katie though, after she took the pendant – a darkness took hold inside of her.

“I couldn’t save Gerwyn. But you…you just may be able to save Katie. She needs your help, Claire, and there isn’t much time.”

To be continued…

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The Pendant – Revisited

Recently I was asked by one of my lovely readers if I intended to write an alternate ending to The Pendant. If you have not read the story of Claire MacRae, follow the links here for Part I, Part II, Part III, and Part IV. At my reader’s request, I have decided to write the tragic ending of The Pendant, which will be published next week on Fiction Friday.

For today’s post I would like to share a bit of the inspiration behind my short story and how I came to write it. I must admit that the interest in The Pendant took me pleasantly by surprise. When I sat down to brainstorm my first Fiction Friday post, I could not decide upon a subject. As a writer, I have lots of stories and ideas floating around in my head. Sometimes though I really struggle to put these thoughts on paper, as my tendency towards perfectionism stunts my creativity. I decided at the time, as a way to relieve some of the pressure, I would use a writing prompt to spark my imagination. I did a quick online search and read through a few lists of writing prompts before settling on this one:

“You’re making your way down a cobbled street when a stocky, red-bearded man beckons you into an alley. He reaches into his coat, produces a locket on a long gold chain, and hands it to you. Upon opening the locket, you find a four-leaf clover pressed beneath a small glass pane. When you look up, the red-bearded man is gone. What happens next?” (Resource)

 

If you have read my story, then you will notice that I changed a few of the details in this writing prompt. After I read the prompt, my mind began creating the characters, backstory, and setting for my story. I had only intended to write a single, stand-alone piece; however, as I drafted the story, I realized that there was a lot more than one post’s worth. The Pendant evolved into four parts, and a lot of my initial ideas about the story changed through the writing process. As an example, I contemplated explaining Katie’s mysterious disappearance through a kidnapping, while writing Parts I and II. After exploring this idea, I decided that I would rather explain her disappearance by connecting it back to the pendant itself. Thus, the creation of the ‘other world’ in Part IV was formed.

So there you have it – a little view into my writing process of The Pendant. Be sure to check back next week to read the tragic, alternate ending of this story. Do you have any predictions as to Claire’s tragic fate? Comment below and share your musings. Also, if you enjoyed today’s post and want to read similar types of posts in the future, click the ‘Like’ button below.

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Imperfect Poetry

During my senior year of University, I took my first creative writing class. Over the course of that semester I explored different styles of writing, and I discovered a lot about myself as a writer. This week I have been revisiting some of my old writings, specifically the poetry I wrote all those years ago. So often, I find myself being really critical of my writing, even if I have spent hours drafting and revising a piece. My tendency towards perfectionism sometimes gets in the way of my creativity, and the writing process loses a bit of its magic. The truth is that nothing in this world is perfect, and yet I still find myself striving for it. In more recent years, I have started to learn and truly see that imperfection can be so beautiful.

Initially, as I read through some of my old poetry, I felt the impulse to edit and ‘perfect’ the poems. Then I paused and took a moment to think back to my younger self, to the college girl who wrote these poems. What was her inspiration at the time? How was she feeling as she wrote? Did she feel proud of her work? I realize now that these little poems are glimpses into my creative past. The poems are not polished or by any means perfect. Instead, they capture some of the first poems I ever shared. At that time, sharing my writing was a big step outside of my comfort zone. As a result, I gained confidence in my writing.

For this week’s post I want to intentionally step outside of my comfort zone again. I am sharing three poems, which I wrote in 2007, and I have NOT revised any of them. This makes my inner perfectionist extremely uneasy. The point of this personal exercise is to share a little piece of my past writings. I am not the same writer that I was over 10 years ago, and I will not be the same writer 10 years from now. My journey as a writer is an ever-changing one. Today, I am appreciative of my early poems and for the young writer who took a risk and put pen to paper.

 

The Lost Vision

I sit silently in my seat

and wonder at the scenes

flashing past my window.

Images, seen fleetingly, from a train—*

my train.

Rolling green hills,

speckled with shadows

from puffy white clouds above.

Seagulls swoop and dive daringly

at the gray waters of the sea.

Just as my eyes become intrigued,

the vision is lost

to sudden blackness—

the tunnel.

Written: 5 November 2007
*Line borrowed from Bronislaw Maj’s “Seen Fleetingly, From a Train”

 

Lonely Fellow

A lonely fellow hangs

by a single stem.

The cold, fall breeze

sends shivers over him.

All his friends left

their mutual home,

dancing elegantly to

their eventual deaths.

Written: 22 November 2007

 

Nature’s Litter

Scattered bits and pieces of all

shapes and sizes, thrown out by

Sister Nature. What she may call

trash, is Sister Earth’s treasure.

 

Discarded trinkets from tall trees,

rolling across the barren ground,

collecting in colorful companies.

Caring Earth awaits to be crowned.

 

Raked by Man into neat heaps,

tempting children to dive head first.

This trash seems absurd, but keeps

seedlings safe until Spring returns.

Written: 5 December 2007

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Haiku Poetry

This week for Fiction Friday, I have decided to switch things up. My creative writing goes through phases, and several years ago I found myself writing lots of poetry. Since that time, however, I have not written any poems. I was feeling playful today and decided to write some Haikus, which is one of my favorite styles of poetry. My inspiration is drawn from nature and the four seasons. I hope you enjoy!

Autumn

Days shorten and fade

Wearing oranges, golds, reds

Leaves depart their trees

Winter

Cold, roaring winds blow –

Sending shivers through branches

Grey skies and short days

Spring

Blank canvas at first

Seeds sprout, blossoms all about

Earth dons a new gown

Summer

Sun rays shine brightly

Coconuts sway in cool breeze

Waves crash upon sands

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The Pendant – Part IV

At some point during the middle of the night, Claire had fallen back to sleep. She awoke several hours later, the sky still dark. Claire felt an ache in her heart, and she placed her hand on her chest, her fingertips touching the pendant. Although she knew it was illogical, she could not shake the feeling that she really had seen Katie; she believed whole-heartedly that Katie was still alive and needed her help. With a newfound sense of determination, Claire threw aside her covers and quickly began to dress herself. It was still very early, and so as not to wake her parents, Claire made sure to step carefully down the staircase, avoiding the creaky spots. She took her shawl from its hook, quietly unlatched the front door, and stepped out onto the street.

She walked at a quick pace, heading directly towards the shop owned by the mysterious red-bearded man. As she neared the shop front, she was shocked by what she saw, or rather did not see – the shop was completely vacant. There was no sign that, just the day before, the shop had been full of various objects. Claire felt confused, and she stood staring through the glass window into the empty shop. At first Claire felt unsure of what to do next, for she had wanted to question the red-bearded man. She could not understand why he had given her the pendant in the first place. She also felt that there was more to the pendant than she knew. After considering her options for a few moments, she began to walk away from the shop towards the outskirts of the village. In the distance she could just make out the dark shadow of the forest. She followed the dirt road until it intersected with a path which led into the forest. She turned, and entered the forest, the trees towering above her.

She continued along the path, walking deeper into the old forest. It had been years since she had walked this path, but she remembered her way. As she neared the river, Claire left the path and wandered amongst the trees, her step slowing as she neared her destination. Before her stood the old oak tree. She stared up at the high branches and felt her heartbeat quicken. She took a deep breath and began her climb. At last she reached the special hideaway, and her heart sank. There was no sign of Katie. Claire sat down in the same spot amongst the branches as she had in her dream. She shut her eyes tightly and opened them again, but nothing had changed. She reached for the pendant and silently wished that Katie would appear. As her eyes began to fill with tears, a ray of light from the rising sun passed through the great forest, reaching the spot where Claire sat.

Claire thought her eyes must be playing tricks on her. The sunlight had revealed a shimmering, transparent doorway hovering directly in front of her. She stood slowly and cautiously approached the doorway. From where she stood, it appeared that through the doorway was merely the forest, as she saw it around her. Claire carefully extended her hand towards the doorway. As she touched the surface, ripples moved through the substance, creating a vibrating hum. At that moment, a light emanated from the pendant. Although she felt afraid, Claire knew what she had to do. She gathered her courage and stepped through the doorway, holding her breath.

Once on the other side of the doorway, Claire found herself standing in the middle of a small meadow. She looked around her, taking in her surroundings. Suddenly, Claire heard a sound from behind her. She whipped around, expecting the worst.

Claire gasped, “Katie?”

“Claire? Is that really you?”

The two friends stared at each other for a moment, and realizing that they were truly seeing the other, they embraced. The years spent apart vanishing, as they held each other. Claire loosened her grasp on Katie and looked into her friend’s eyes. Katie smiled back at Claire.

Claire spoke, “Katie, why have you been gone all these years? And, where are we exactly?”

Katie replied, “I have been trapped here in this place, in what I think may be another world, since the day I disappeared. I have tried to find my way back home. But I lost the pendant, which you wear now. Since losing it, I have been unable to leave this place.”

“You’ve seen this pendant before?” Claire asked.

“Yes….Three years ago, a peddler stopped by my parents’ farm. My parents kindly declined what he offered for sale. As he walked away, I saw something drop from one of his pockets. I picked up the silver necklace, and tried to give it back to him, but he shook his head. He told me that the pendant belonged to me. I didn’t understand what he meant, but I felt compelled to keep the beautiful trinket. When I went to sleep that night, I had the most real and strange dreams. When I awoke the next morning, I felt drawn to our secret place. It was there that I found a doorway into this world. I never intended to remain here, and I only wanted to explore for a little while….Beyond this meadow, where we stand now, there is a beautiful spring. I found it all those years ago, and I couldn’t resist swimming in its deep, crystal clear waters. As I swam, the necklace caught upon the roots of a submerged tree, and the pendant began to fall to the depths of the spring. I tried to grasp it, but it sank quickly, and fell further down until it disappeared into the darkness. At first I didn’t realize the significance of having lost the pendant, but I soon discovered that I could not find a way out of this world….I believe the pendant is somehow the key to passing through the doorways that connect this world to our own. From time to time, the doorways have re-appeared for a short while, but without the pendant there is no way to pass through them.”

Claire asked, “If you have been here all this time, why has it taken so long for us to find one another?”

Katie continued, “I don’t know exactly how it works, but I believe the moment you accepted the pendant as your own, something changed here. It was as if a tremor spread through this world. I could sense you, as though you were right beside me. It wasn’t until last night, as we both slept, that our dreams connected us. When I saw that you wore the pendant, I felt hopeful for the first time in three years.”

At the conclusion of her story, Katie’s eyes filled with tears. Claire reached out and held her hand.

“Everything is going to be alright, Katie. We can go home, together.”

At that moment, a vibrating hum echoed from the edge of the meadow. Both girls turned their heads in the direction of the sound.

Katie spoke, “I think I know where to find the doorway home. Come with me.”

The girls walked together towards the sound, and it grew louder as they drew closer. Claire found herself standing before the most beautiful spring she had ever seen. Beneath the surface of the perfect waters, Claire saw the shimmering doorway. She and Katie looked at each other, and joined their hands once again.

“On the count of three?” asked Katie

Claire replied, “One. Two. Three!”

The girls dove in together, swimming down towards the shimmering doorway. As they swam closer, the pendant glowed with light. As they swam through the doorway, the world flipped, and suddenly they were swimming up. When they broke the water’s surface, both Claire and Katie gasped for air. They swam for the bank, and once they had caught their breath, they realized that they were in the river where they had played every summer. Claire and Katie laughed with joy and hugged one another. When they released their embrace, Katie pointed at Claire’s neck.

“Claire! The pendant. It’s gone!” Katie gasped.

Claire looked down and felt at her chest, where the necklace had once been, but it was gone. Claire thought for a moment, and remembering what the red-bearded man had said to her – that she would find what she sought, she now understood what he had meant.

Claire smiled, “We don’t need it anymore. You’re home now, and that’s all that matters.”

The girls shared more smiles, and then pulled themselves up the embankment. They walked together hand-in-hand down the forest path, as if no time had been lost.


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The Pendant – Part III

Claire spent the majority of the day at the Hanovers’, learning the various tasks and chores she would be doing in the milk house and around the farm. She enjoyed the work, and she felt confident that in time she would learn more about the running of the dairy farm. The day passed quickly, and as evening approached Claire bid the Hanovers farewell and began her walk back home. The sun was low in the sky and cast golden light over the landscape. She felt satisfied with the work she had accomplished during her first day. She walked along the dirt road at a leisurely pace, carrying a basket in one hand, which was filled with fresh milk, cheese, and butter. Mrs. Hanover had prepared the basket, and sent it home with Claire, slipping in a few coins beneath the goods.

At last, Claire reached her front door. The sun had dipped below the horizon, transforming the sky into shades of yellow and pink fading into grey. Claire paused, looking at the sky and thought to herself how different the day felt as compared to this morning. She too felt different, and she gently touched the pendant, breathing a deep, contented sigh. Claire turned, placing her hand upon the handle, and let herself into the small foyer. She could hear her mother in the kitchen, no doubt preparing supper. She felt her heart flutter with excitement. She could not wait to tell her parents about her good luck in finding work. She hung her shawl on a hook and made her way towards the kitchen, which was situated at the rear of the house. Her mother heard her steps as she walked along the passage leading back to the kitchen.

“Is that you, Claire?” her mother called out.

“Yes, Ma-ma” replied Claire.

“My dearest, you left very early this morning. Where have you been all day?”

“Ma-ma, I have the most wonderful news! I will tell you and Papa everything at supper.”

Her mother looked at Claire curiously, “And what do you have in the basket there?”

“I promise, I will explain everything. Do you need any help finishing up supper?”

“No, no. Go and wash up, and tell your father that supper is ready.”

“I will. Let me take this basket into the cellar, first.”

Claire walked past her mother and opened a narrow door, which led down into the cellar. She flipped a small switch, attached to the wall, and walked gingerly down the stone steps. As she descended beneath the main level of the house, the temperature of the air grew cooler. The cellar was dimly lit from a single lightbulb hanging from the ceiling in the center of the room. Claire located space on a nearby shelf and began to unpack the basket. Underneath the wheel of cheese, Claire found the silver coins that Mrs. Hanover had stashed. She smiled and sent out a thought of thanks. She dropped the coins into her pocket and hung the basket by its handle from one of the many hooks that dangled from the ceiling.

She returned to the kitchen, as her mother was setting the table. Claire washed her hands and face in the sink, the pendant dangling from her neck as she bent over the basin. After drying her hands and face, she tucked the necklace beneath her shirt in a swift, inconspicuous motion. Claire did not understand why, but she wanted to keep the pendant a secret, at least for now. She felt surprised that her mother had not noticed her wearing it when she had first walked into the kitchen.

With the pendant now concealed, she walked down the long passage towards the sitting room. She found her father sitting in his favorite chair, which was nearest to the window at the front of the house. He had not heard Claire’s approaching footsteps, and he appeared to be deep in thought.

“Hello Papa,” said Claire.

At this greeting, Claire’s father jerked his head in her direction. He replied dazedly, “Oh, Claire. I didn’t hear you come in. What is the time?” He reached for his pocket watch.

“Supper is ready, Papa. Also, I have some news to share with you and Ma-ma.”

“I see. Well, then let us not delay any further.”

He got up from his chair and motioned for Claire to lead the way. They returned to the kitchen, where her mother was waiting. They each took their respective chairs – Claire’s father sitting at the head of the table. Although Claire was rather peckish, she could not wait a moment longer in telling her parents all that had transpired that day.

“I have got a job!” Claire blurted out excitedly.

Her parents stared at her with surprise. “What do you mean, Claire?” her mother asked.

“The Hanovers have offered me work on their farm. That’s where I have been all day.”

“I don’t understand. Why have they offered you work, Claire?” asked her father.

“Please, don’t be angry with me. I know that you and Ma-ma are worried about…about money. I overheard you talking the other night. I felt so sad, and I want to be helpful. I am certainly old enough to work, and I want to work.”

Her mother’s eyes glistened with tears. Her father’s expression too had softened. He leaned across the table, and with his left hand he held Claire’s face.

He smiled warmly, “My sweet girl. You have the kindest and most loving heart.”

Claire smiled back. A sense of relief and gratitude swelled throughout her chest. She continued her telling her story and produced the coins from her pocket. She told them everything in great detail, except for the strange encounter with the red-bearded man and how he had given her the pendant. With her story concluded and supper finished, Claire helped her mother to clear the table and wash the dishes. They all three retired to the sitting room. Her father read aloud a chapter from his favorite book, while Claire and her mother sipped tea. For the first time since the accident, her parents’ spirits seemed lighter and hopeful. Claire felt relaxed and completely at ease. Her eyes were heavy, and she felt that sleep was not far off.

She wished her parents goodnight and made her way upstairs to her room. She changed out of her clothes and into her nightgown. Beside her bed, she stood before the floor-length mirror and gazed at her reflection. Her eyes were drawn to the pendant. She traced the four leaves of the clover beneath the glass with her forefinger. As she stared at the pendant’s reflection, her eyes saw a quick flash and for a brief moment she witnessed an image, not of herself, but that of Katie. Claire blinked and looked again into the mirror. The reflection that stared back was her own. Claire shook her head and thought that she simply must be tired. She turned out the light and crawled into her bed. Once she closed her eyes, Claire fell fast asleep.

Her mind swirled with dreams. She dreamt of her childhood – long, summer days spent at the river with the Hanover children and the old oak tree she and Katie used to climb. The tree had been their special hideaway, a place where they could be together and share their most intimate secrets. Claire’s dreams wove together all of her happy memories with Katie, the images bright and vibrant with color. Gradually the images darkened, and the memories of Katie’s disappearance flashed through Claire’s mind. She saw the tear-stained faces of the Hanovers. Next she was running to the oak tree, hoping to find Katie there. Looking up, time seemed to race across the sky. In one instant the moon and stars shown, and in the next instant the sun quickly rose and then set again. The passing of night and day quickened the longer Claire’s dream-self stared up at the sky, and her head felt dizzy.

Suddenly, everything stopped and it was night again. Claire’s eyes, still gazing upward, noticed a soft light amongst the branches of the oak tree. She began climbing the tree, and when she reached the hideaway, she saw a glowing orb of light, floating before her. Claire inched closer to the light, her eyes transfixed. She reached out with both hands and gently cradled the orb in her palms. She drew it towards her; something about it felt so familiar. She heard indistinct whispers emanating from it, and she listened closely. A clear and ethereal voice spoke, “Claireeee.”

Claire started and dropped the orb. As it fell from her hands, the light expanded and grew brighter. There was a quick flash, and when Claire looked again, she saw Katie sitting right in front of her. Her heart leapt into her throat; even in her dream, she could not believe her eyes.

“Katie?” Claire asked tentatively.

Katie nodded her head in response.

Forgetting that she was still dreaming, Claire smiled and felt her sorrow leave. “Katie, we have all been so worried about you. Where have you been all this time? I’ve missed you so much.”

Katie stared back at Claire with an impassive expression. She slowly opened her mouth, and when she spoke her voice sounded hushed and constrained. “Claire….You have to help me, Claire.”

“What do you mean? You’re here. You’re safe. Everything is alright” Claire spoke hurriedly.

Katie raised her arm, pointing her finger at Claire’s neck. Claire looked down and saw the pendant. It was glowing, and the metal felt warm against her skin. Claire did not understand what Katie meant, nor did she understand why the necklace now felt as though it were alive. Claire touched the pendant, and it seemed to vibrate beneath her fingers. She looked again into Katie’s eyes. Katie looked back at her, with a lost and pleading gaze.

Katie spoke slowly, “Claire….Please….Please, help me.”

“I’m right here, Katie. I’m here!” Claire felt confused and helpless.

Katie reached out her hand. Claire extended her hand towards Katie’s. The moment their fingers touched, Katie vanished. Claire looked around, and she called out for Katie.

Silence.

Claire’s heart beat faster and she began to panic. She yelled louder, screaming Katie’s name. She woke with a start and found herself back in her room. Her heart was still racing, and her skin felt damp with sweat. She sat up in her bed and looked about her, realizing that she had only been dreaming. It had all felt so real; the pendant now seemed cold and lifeless resting between her collarbones. She recalled the desperate look in Katie’s eyes. A lump formed inside her throat and tears filled her eyes. She hugged her knees into her chest and quietly wept.

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The Pendant – Choose Your Ending

For the past two weeks on Fiction Friday I have written two parts of a short story titled The Pendant. If you missed reading those posts, follow the links here for Part I and Part II.

I intend to complete the entire story within two more posts, totaling in four parts. At this point, I find myself debating between two possible endings. I had an idea this week and remembered that as a kid I enjoyed reading books that allowed the reader to choose the ending. So I have decided to open up to you, my readers, and find out what type of ending you all would like. Would you prefer The Pendant to have a happy or a tragic ending?

Comment below to cast your vote. I will be reading all of the comments. Whichever ending receives the most votes will be the direction this story will turn. The fate of Claire MacRae rests in your decision, dear readers.

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The Pendant – Part II

The dirt road had become muddy after the heavy downpour, but Claire did not mind and walked on towards the Hanovers’ Farm, skirting around the larger puddles. The sky was a brilliant blue with a scattering of puffy white clouds. The morning felt refreshed and renewed after the rain, and the sun shone brightly, spreading its rays of light across the verdant fields. For the first time in many days, Claire’s mind felt light and cheery, and she began to whistle as she walked.

She reached the dairy farm and decided to first visit Mrs. Hanover in the main house, before making her inquiries about work in the milk house. She made her way to the side of the house, where the kitchen was situated, certain that Mrs. Hanover would be there. As she neared the kitchen door, Mrs. Hanover spotted Claire from one of the open windows. She called out, “Claire MacRae, is that you? Come inside, my dear girl.”

Claire let herself in through the door and stepped inside. Mrs. Hanover greeted Claire with a smile and a warm embrace. She stepped back and looked into Claire’s face, “What a delightful surprise to see you this morning! Would you like a cup of tea? I’ve just put the kettle on.”

“Yes please,” replied Claire.

Mrs. Hanover busied herself with arranging the tea-things, while Claire seated herself at the long, narrow table. This was not the first time Claire had been inside this kitchen. As a young girl, she had spent many a summer afternoon drinking fresh milk and eating biscuits with the Hanover children. Claire thought fondly of those carefree times spent with her friends, laughing and playing around the farm. Growing up as an only child, Claire had bonded with the four Hanover children as though they were her own siblings. Her best friend, Katie, was the same age as Claire, and in fact their birthdays were a mere four days apart. The two girls were inseparable, that is, up until the day Katie had disappeared, three years prior.

Claire’s mind snapped back to the present as Mrs. Hanover placed a teacup with saucer before her and poured her tea. “Thank you,” said Claire. She carefully added fresh cream to her cup and observed the clouds of milk, as they swirled and mingled with the black tea.

Mrs. Hanover spoke, “I’m so glad you’ve come, Claire. It has been too long since I last saw you or your parents. How is your father? Is he recovering well?”

“He is doing better now. The doctor says that he is out of danger from infection. But…” Claire paused. “But he is changed from the man he was…before the accident.”

Mrs. Hanover gently squeezed Claire’s right hand, which was resting upon the table. She sighed, “This must be hard on your father, as someone who has worked with his hands the whole of his life. He has been in my prayers since the accident. I heard that he lost his place at the masonry. A terrible shame.”

Claire nodded, not knowing what to say. She took a sip of her tea, and Mrs. Hanover glimpsed the pendant.

“What a beautiful necklace! I’ve never seen another quite like it.”

Claire replaced her teacup on its saucer and felt towards the pendant where it lay near her collarbone. She felt unsure if she should tell Mrs. Hanover the story of how she came to have the necklace. She replied, “Thank you. It is rather unique.” Before Mrs. Hanover could ask any questions, Claire continued, “Mrs. Hanover, the reason I have come today is…well, because father cannot work at his trade, as you know…I was hoping, or rather, I was wondering if…”

“If you may find work here on the farm? My dear Claire, of course! We would love nothing more than to have your help and in turn help your family. I have known you all of your life; you are like one of my own children,” Mrs. Hanover said with a beaming smile.

Claire felt as though a heavy weight had been lifted from her shoulders. She gasped, “Thank you! Thank you, Mrs. Hanover!” She got up from the table, walking to the opposite side, kneeling beside Mrs. Hanover’s chair and hugging her tightly.

“Bless you, my sweet child,” whispered Mrs. Hanover as she kissed the top of Claire’s head.

Claire loosened her grip and smiled up at Mrs. Hanover. For a moment Claire thought she was looking into Katie’s eyes once again; Katie had inherited her mother’s eyes – green as the forest with flecks of amber and a dark outline, like a shadow. Claire blinked and recognized Mrs. Hanover’s warm expression.

Mrs. Hanover spoke, “Now, if you have finished your tea, we will walk over to the milk house together and speak to Mr. Hanover.” Claire stood and helped Mrs. Hanover to clear away the tea.

With the kitchen tidied, the two ladies went out the kitchen door. They walked arm in arm towards a large, limestone building behind the house. Claire felt at ease and lifted her gaze to the sky, breathing deeply.

To be continued…

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The Pendant – Part I

Claire stepped onto the cobbled street from her front door. The early morning sky was grey, and the air felt heavy with moisture. Claire thought it would most certainly rain, and she sighed. She turned and began to make her way down the small street, the sound of her boots echoing off of the stones. As she neared the main square of the village, drops of rain began to fall. She quickened her pace and tucked her hands beneath her shawl. Crossing the main square she caught a glimpse of the small reflection pool, which stood in the center, a popular meeting place; the rain drops created ripples through the still waters, obscuring the reflection of the sky. Claire continued past the pool and turned down another street.

As she walked, her mind was occupied with the conversation she had overheard several nights ago – her parents had been talking late into the night. Only two months prior a terrible accident had befallen Claire’s father, and it had nearly taken his life. He had lost his right arm and could no longer work at his trade. Claire’s mother for many years had used her skill at sewing to help bring in a little money for the family, but it wasn’t enough to support all of them. Claire could sense the worry in her parents’ voices as they reviewed the stack of overdue bills. After listening for awhile from the top of the stairs, Claire crept quietly back to her room. That night she fell asleep with a heavy heart and vowed to find a way to help her family.

Since that night, Claire had gone out each morning, as she did on this morning, in hopes of finding work. So far she had had no luck, and as each day passed Claire grew weary; for the village she called home was of a modest size and population, and Claire had nearly exhausted all of her resources in securing a job.

As Claire neared the end of the street, she heard a noise. She turned her head in the direction of the sound and saw a stocky, red-bearded man smoking a pipe and standing under a green awning at the front of a shop. She didn’t recognize the man, but he beckoned her to come inside the shop and wait for the rain to pass. Claire stood for a moment in the street deciding whether or not to press on to her destination. The rain suddenly began pouring in torrents. Claire quickly ducked into the shop, as the man held the door open for her.

Once inside the shop Claire looked about her and to her amazement the tiny shop was filled with an assortment of objects. There was a variety of furniture, all handmade. In the corner stood a rack of wool coats and jumpers. A large bookcase covered the back wall, filled with books. To her left, she saw a long oak counter, and behind it were shelves which held bottles of every size and shape; some of the bottles appeared to contain herbs or dried ingredients, while others held liquids of different colors, creating a sort of rainbow.

The man walked behind the counter, placing his pipe into his pocket. “And how can I help you today, Miss Claire?”

Claire was a bit confused because she hadn’t intended to come into this shop had it not been for the sudden downpour. And how did he know her name, she wondered. She had lived in the village her entire life and knew almost everyone, if not by name then certainly by reputation. This man was a new face.

“I thank you, sir, for your kindness in helping me out of the rain, but I must confess that I haven’t come to shop. I was on my way to the Hanovers’ Dairy Farm at the edge of town.”

“I see. And what is it that you seek there?”

“I was going to inquire after work, perhaps as a milkmaid,” replied Claire.

The man looked at her thoughtfully and then turned his back to Claire to open a small drawer situated below the shelves. As he faced Claire again, he held something in his hand. He motioned for Claire to come closer.

“I believe this will bring you what you seek.” The man held out his hand to reveal a pendant on a silver chain. The small pendant contained a four-leaf clover pressed beneath a small glass pane. “It is your’s,” he said, offering the necklace.

Claire shook her head, “I’m sorry, sir, but I cannot afford a beautiful necklace such as this.”

“Miss Claire, this necklace belongs to you, truly. Please, take it, and use it well.” He smiled warmly.

Claire couldn’t understand why, but she felt compelled to accept the gift. The moment she took the necklace into her own hand, the rain outside stopped.

“Well I suppose you’ll be wanting to get to the Hanovers’. I wish you a good day, Miss Claire.”

Claire nodded in response, “And to you.”

As she left the shop, she fastened the jewelry about her neck and gently touched the pendant. She looked up at the sky and noticed that it had grown brighter – the clouds were clearing. Claire felt her own spirits lifting as she continued on her way to the dairy farm. She couldn’t understand why she felt this way, but she sensed that everything would be alright.

To be continued…


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